From Proposal to Final Paper

1) Add the results and dicussion section, and a figure of your results.
2) Change to past tense throughout
3) Clean up your method section with exact numbers and procedures (ask Dave how he assigned people to conditions)
Clarify if you dropped any participants out due to lack of data or non-compliance.
4) Address all comments and suggestions made on your proposal.
If you follow all suggestions in your revision you will get FULL CREDIT for the proposal.